Our plan for our Preliminary Exercise was quickly made up and put into action the day of shooting. We decided not to contrast our scene with Sebs & Martins in order to keep it simple and easier for us to get done a lot quicker. We wanted to leave our audience wanting more of our short sequence so we decided to add a cliff-hanger at the end of the scene.
Seb is established as mysterious, the lone wolf. Martin is established as a calm, cool second party waiting in the wings for our lone wolf to show up. These characters worked well in the particular theme of our storyline because both of them were not alienated in any way from the situation at any time. We did not focus on costumes, lighting and depth of detail with our props (blank piece of paper to represent “The Documents”) as this was our first time shooting we thought it would be best to get used to the whole camera work in the field projects.
The location was extremely nearby and easy to find. However we were delayed for some time by students making their way past and through our shooting scene. The hallway was the perfect setup to introduce our lone wolf character: Seb. The small, tight little room created a claustrophobic effect for the duration of our seedy exchange between Seb & Martin. Unfortunately some mistakes were made by me and Nathan but as it was our first time we were let off with minimum punishments. Our mistakes noticed were dead space and silence but next time I will definitely be sure not to make the same mistake again.
We were given feedback on our work when the day came that involved us presenting it to the class. Here are some of the comments that were provided-
"Great work guys but i think you went a bit off with the sound in a few places and your choice in camera angle did create an amount of dead space in one or two scenes" John
"I liked the silence between both characters because it created tension and suspense for many people" Cameron
"I thought the choice in setting was interesting as it was a small space to work in but did not affect the fact that it created a claustrophobic feeling during the secret conversation"
I will take in these comments in order to create a more solid piece of work next time.